11-24-2021, 03:45 PM
I like the story framework. I like that it has to do with the follies of resurrection, but the main conflict comes from the resurrecter's internal flaws rather than a flaw with the resurrection process itself. I also feel like setting it in a near-utopia could be a nice contrast between the world and the main character. Something like even though almost everyone's needs are met he's still this pocket of suffering in an otherwise near perfect world; idk I'm not a writer.
I'll definitely be checking it out if you release it.
Cool vest design. I think it'd also be a pretty cool plate carrier design, too.
I'll definitely be checking it out if you release it.
Cool vest design. I think it'd also be a pretty cool plate carrier design, too.
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