05-26-2021, 06:14 PM
This is definitely a good song, it sounds original to me. As far as constructive criticism goes, I felt like the vocals could be improved, especially when the vocals begin. For the lyrics, lines such as "The rainfall and the snow" and
"While imaginations grow" might sound better as "Rainfall and the snow" and
"Imaginations grow."
It's definitely a well done song, keep making music and be sure to post it here!
"While imaginations grow" might sound better as "Rainfall and the snow" and
"Imaginations grow."
It's definitely a well done song, keep making music and be sure to post it here!